Thursday, December 10, 2009

निरोप

निघताना ओठी
नि:शब्द निरोप,
नि:श्वास निर्माल्य
निग्रहाचे.


- मंदार.

5 comments:

Shashank Kanade said...

सात शब्द, हजार भावना.

Milind Gadre said...

Felt suffocated while reading.
This poem has found its self.

Saee said...

Very pretty. Perfectly organised words.
Bravo!

Mandar Gadre said...

:-)

Gayatri said...

"नि:श्वास निर्माल्य
निग्रहाचे"
..surekh!

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